Evaluation Q7&8. Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?

7&8.Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learned in the progression from it to the full product?/ Audience feedback and comment.

The first shot has a better medium long shot framing compared to the second preliminary shot which has got a medium close up shot. however i feel that there should have been so much space at the top for the first shot. The difference between the two shots is that in the first shot the character fits into the frame and in the other shot the character doesn't. The shots above show how we have improved on framing.

These two screen grabs are quite similar except that the mise en scene is different i feel that the preliminary screen grab (on the right) looks better than the final product screen grab because its more close up therefore making it obvious that the framing is meant to be a close up shot. However i feel that the final screen grab (to the left) looks sharper and its mise en scene is so much better than the preliminary screen grab because it shows us that she is wearing a fur coat therefore giving us a clue to what role she plays in the clip. The gate being there gives us the feel that she is looked in and can't escape. Comparing this to the preliminary screen grab the mise en scene within this frame doesn't really show or tell us much about the characters role. This shows my progression in the mise en scene section.

Audience FeedBack and comment

This image was gotten from http://www.wordle.net/. I typed out the feed back i got from one of my audience and wordle picked out the words that came up the most from the feedback and enlarged them. I chose what colour font and setting i wanted.

Another form of audience fee back that i got was a video but it couldn't be uploaded to blogger due to technical difficulties. so i would use my back up plan which is the questionnaire i gave to my audience to get there feedback.

By Tyrone Gaskin


1) Choose one aspect of film language that has been used especially well in this movie and say why.
The use of non diegetic sound to give a suspenseful effect.


2) Can you recognise any stereotypes in this movie?
The prostitute didn’t look happy like any other prostitute.

3) Can you think of any intertextual references with any other movies when you watch this movie? Explain.
Eastenders because there use to be a scene with Janine Butcher as a prostitute.


4) Who do you think would be the audience for this movie?
Young people from 16-25.


5) Write down 5 words which would describe this film?
An interesting thriller suspense story.

6) What sort of institution do you think would release this movie?
Paramount Pictures because they would be interested in trying out a big storyline that would attract audiences.